Qubool Hai 04th April 2014 Written Update

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Qubool Hai 04th April 2014 Written Update by Rimjhim

Qubool Hai 04th April 2014 Written Episode

Scene 1:
Location: Ayan’s residence
while zoya doubts tanveer, and turns around, she finds tanveer mocking her for the same. she is shocked. As tanveer leaves, zoya is sure that tanveer is behind this all. She goes to asad’s room and says that tanveer is behind all this and tells about the doubt regarding tanveer and places her as the murderer too. He is not willing to agree, and says that she knows noone likes tanveer and hence wants to put mamu’s blame for the crime on tanveer. zoya says that she has no reason to do it, as all events now indicate to tanveer. Asad is not willing to still agree and places mamu as the murderer, and asks her to stop this rant. he again threatens her, while she defiantly asks him what can he do, break off with her and he is happy to go away from her if he so feels, but she would prove that he isnt a killer. haider comes in saying that he is, but not of rashid’s.

Tanveer is lustily eyeing the jwellery, when razia asks whats she doing with her jewellery. tanveer says that these are her jewellery and not razia’s but resemble hers, and taunts her for the same. razia is confused. tasnveer tells that her jewellery is safe in the locker. when razia checks on the jewellery, and finds them the fake ones, tanveer turns around and tells razia that she can befool anyone but not her. razia agrees and demands to take the jwellery back. But tanveer says that she isnt in the age to have it anymore. Razia says that she wont let go. tanveer tells razia that if she wants them back, then she would reveal all of razia’s secrets. Razia too reciprocates the same.

Haider shows them the burnt pic, seeing which both asad and zoya are boggled. Zoya reaffirms that this proves that mamu isnt the murderer. Asad is confused whats tanveer doing with rashid. Haider says that the proof is right in front of him and he would have to believe it. Zoya says that this would save mamu. haider says that tanveer was with rashid till the last minute, but that still doesnt prove that she committed the murder. He says that mamu could still be the murderer. And hen ce mamu could still be convicted as all the evidence is still against him. Asad said that he just told that mamu didnt kill rashid, but is a murderer, then who did he kill. haider reveals to them that mamu killed his parents, and …and then stops. zoya asks who else did he kill, and is shocked to know that her father killed his parenst and asks when he did it, and why didnt he tell her. This surprises asad and shocks zoya.haider says that he would tell her. zoya says that she is his sister, and demands to know right then why mamu killed his parenst and goes berserk. haider says that she would know everything but right now, he asks her to let be, as he wants mamu to be punished but niot for other crimes. He says that they would have to expose tanveer and get mamu innocent. Asad asks why does he want to save mamu, if he killed his parents. haider says that he doesnt want to save him, rather he hates mamu, and wanted to spoil him and his family. zoya understands that as the reason why he married humaira. Haider agrees and tells them why he married humairas, to torture humaira and her father. he adds that he got successful too, and couold have left in peace. asad asks why he didnt go. haider says that he has grown up with hatred and rage, and never let love seep in. But this family loved him so much, zoya’s love and humaira’s love, which chained him back to this house. He fgoes out and gets humaira inside, who is tensed herself. He says tyhat he was emboldened by their love, and hence he told everything to humaira, who suggested that the criminal should be punished but only for their criems. He says that he wants to expose tanveer. Humaira stands beside haider, supporting him. haider says that tanveer is very shrewd and it would be very difficult to implicate her. Asad says that they have just two days to prove that tanveer was behind all this, as mamu’s heaing is in two days. Zoya says that she has a plan for that, but for that she would need everyone’s support. humaira refers to her as her sister, and hugs her tightly, shocking zoya and overwhelming her with emotions. She tells humaira that they would get mamu free.

As dilshad wakes up with a headache, she finds shirin standing there, with water. she complies and thasnks her. shirin says that when people do things for their own people, they shouldnt be thankful. Dilshad says that she is thankful that shirin accepted her and forgave her for everything. shirin says that it feels that everything slipped away and nothing remains now. dilshad asks her not to talk like this, as till the last breath, there’s a purpose of life and one day they would meet rashid, and when they do, they shall tell, that they werent at peace for a minute and whoever did this crime, would be punished. shirin says that she deserves the most punishment, as due to her, he had been tortured by razia and mamu. dilshad asks her not to feel guilty as she did nothing, but whoever did this, would definitely be punished, as asad and zoya would see that it happens.

Asad is shocked at zoya’s plan, and how she thinks. Zoya tells them that she knows tanveer and tells that tanveer thinks that asad and zoya are on the verge of a divorce and are waiting for a final blow, and that they would have to take advantrage of that. asad is not confident. But haider says that zoya’s plan has some substance, it coudl work and that this would checkmate humaira from all sides. Zoya says that they dont have time to think and they shall to implement the plan by tomorrow. Humaira says that she hoeps everything happens according to plan and no mistake happens. zoya says that there’s no scope of that. Humaira tells zoya that they share the same grief, but she was more concerned for mamu that she herself. They bod each other goopdnight, and haider and humaira leave asad and zoya in the room. zoya closes the door behind them. Asad ahnd zoya eye each other tensedly, and then look away. the screen freezes on their tensed faces.

Precap: Asad profusely asks for an apology, for mistrusting her and torturing her like that. Zoya says that she would forgive him on one condition, that he would never again talk of leaving her, and distancing himself. Asad promises that nothing would seperate them ever, not even death. Meranwhile, while tanveer is lying around, razia puts a knife around tanveer, neck, and tells her to beware beforev she plans and plots anything against her and tells her that she has no right anymore to her, her husband and her jewellery. tanveer reminds her that she is the other woman, and mamu’s second wife. razia tells her that she is sadly mistaken as she doesnt remember that she has divorced mamu. tanveer is confused. She shows tanveer the dvorce papres that she manages to implicate, by forging. Tanveer is shocked.

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521 Comments

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 12:48

      yess suni i listen the song.
      it is nice.
      but the i dont like the line noor-e-khuda tu kahan chupa hai bataa.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 13:02

      The line that says ” tell us where you are hiding ” .
      Why do you not like that line ?
      Is it because it’s questioning God ?

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 13:06

      yess cause we all know where god is.
      so why should we ask such thinks.
      it will make us guilty.
      in front of god…

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 13:12

      I guess it is the way of humans sometimes when they face challenges , pain and disappointment . It’s not always easy to keep faith . We get lost and lose hope and feel that even God has left us . It’s a temporary feeling for some people .

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 13:18

      i know some people thinks like that.
      but it is also a big sin.
      near god…

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 13:22

      I know what you’re saying . You’re not wrong . We should never question God’s plans .
      He knows best . But , let’s use Jhanvi as an example , if a person like her questioned . .
      wouldn’t it be understandable . ?

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 13:29

      i think no.
      cause god says he will fullfill all your prayers.
      no matter how much time does it takes to fullfill.
      just you have to keep faith in god.
      and god says that he never let any on his followers with empty hands..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 13:32

      I guess we can only know for certain how strong we are when we ourselves are tested .
      She never got happiness in her life from the clips I saw .
      She chose to die to get relief .

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 13:43

      but doing suicide is also a big sin.
      god says you die once in this world.
      and by doing that you feel the pain once in the world.
      but after that god will punish us.
      and we have to do suicide again and again there.
      and we have to feel the pain again and again there.
      till judgement day.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 14:00

      In her case it was a bit different though .
      He poisoned her , she just chose to not be saved by him .
      I can understand her decision .

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 14:04

      but not talking antidode is also a one kind of making suicide…

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 14:08

      sorry its taking..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 14:11

      Think like her a bit , in her frame of mind , after so much torture . . she saw only one way to be free . I know , she was wrong in a way .
      It’s thought provoking to me . Did you watch that serial ?

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 14:21

      yess i watch that serial.
      but it is ended in 2013 start…
      why do you ask me that question..
      do you have any doubts….

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 14:27

      No , I couldn’t remember you saying if watched it .
      I only remember that you knew where Karnavir acted before .
      I’m reading the synopsis of that serial , it’s very interesting and different ,
      I wanted your opinion on if it’s worth watching , or if it just reads well .

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 14:46

      by reading you will know only story.
      and by watching you can see their exprecions too..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 14:51

      Most books that I’ve read though , are much better as books for me ,
      than when they are made into movies . ..
      But. . with a serial , I agree , it’s better to watch . ..

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 14:58

      cause serials are not written in books.
      it will take so many pages that you not even put it in your hands.

  1. allahu akbar
    April 05, 10:04 Reply

    Bye everyone…….I need to go now…..
    Sameer I will have your poem ready in a couple of hours…..
    Please don’t forget to pray for my dad.
    Thank you…..
    Byeeeeeeee

  2. eeman-1d
    April 05, 09:57 Reply

    Hi @Allahu Akbar can i have your intro

  3. eeman-1d
    April 05, 09:54 Reply

    I think I lost connection with everyone one or maybe no one can see my messages

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 10:00

      hi eeman..
      and welcome.

  4. allahu akbar
    April 05, 09:39 Reply

    I will probably have a poem up today or maybe tommorow…..
    Any specific topics….

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:44

      Ok then ….the poem will be on anything I wish.

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 09:49

      hey sofia.
      where is the urdu poem.
      are you still writing it..

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:51

      I don’t want to embaress myself so I’m trying to perfect it.

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:57

      Sorry to keep you waiting…..it is the first urdu poem I’ve done.

  5. eeman-1d
    April 05, 09:36 Reply

    Hi Izzy how are you I finally found you plz talk to me

  6. ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
    April 05, 09:35 Reply

    Sameer that song is very good . .
    Deep meaning and perfect for that VM . .
    The lyrics were perfect .
    I know it from b4 , but I hadn’t heard it for a long time ..
    Thanks .,
    It’s so sad , but her situation in the serial is a reality for some women . ..

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 09:54

      yess i can understand it.
      there are also sadist people’s in this world.
      may god rescue all the women’s,child’s,& parent’s.
      from them.

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 10:05

      I don’t know what your talking about….but I’ll pray too.

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 13:01

      we was talking about the sadist people who tortures other people for make happy themselves.

  7. allahu akbar
    April 05, 09:15 Reply

    Thank you…..I like the death poem too……I think that was my fav.

  8. allahu akbar
    April 05, 09:14 Reply

    Oh yeh…….its my little sisters birthday tommorow………
    And my dad has work tommorow……..
    Can everyone please pray that he gets a day off…….
    Because he has already asked and they said no……
    But he is going to ask 1 more time today……
    Please pray my dad will be with us…..
    Please.
    Thank you..

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:21

      Do you drink 8 glasses of water a day?

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:25

      Oh yeh…..you said no one ever died of a broken heart…..
      But you don’t live properly with one either…..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 09:26

      Yes , sometimes more . .
      It’s our responsibility to take care of our health ,
      so I try to do what’s right . .

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 09:29

      ok i’ll pray that your dad will be there with you..

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:29

      If I’m really hot or thirsty then I will take otherwise I just have juice….

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:30

      Thank you everyone……I really appreciate it.
      God bless all of you.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 09:31

      I saw it being said that :
      ” you don’t die from a broken heart , it only feels like you did ” . .

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:33

      Oh I never heard the full quote before

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 09:38

      Actually it’s
      ” You don’t die from a broken heart , you only wish that you did “

    • allahu akbar
      April 05, 09:41

      Ohhh yeh ……I think I heard that.

  9. allahu akbar
    April 05, 09:11 Reply

    Sameer-s
    I drink a lot of juice, but I hardly ever drink plain water…..
    But at night time my mom mixes some suraths in water and I drink that…..
    And before going sleep I drink atleast 5 sips…….that’s it……I have fruit, veg…..basically everything my mom makes I eat it without complaining…..if I feel hot I drink some because I’ve fainted a couple of times.
    But I hardly ever drink a full glass of water.

  10. izzy-girl'7
    April 05, 08:58 Reply

    Drew am on my way to the target,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

  11. sameer-s
    April 05, 08:36 Reply

    hi suni.
    iam back.
    and i saw your response.
    what do you think karanvir will suits in which role.
    surbhi’s love interest.
    or as a negative character.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 08:41

      I think GK is planning to use him as Surbhi’s love interest ..
      He seems as though he’s a lot more easy going than KSG , from the other videos I saw online .
      So , I’m thinking that he is capable of doing romance . ..

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 08:45

      ok but i really want him in a negative role.
      cause in qh at present there is no male negative character.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 08:51

      On most serials there are no negative make characters 🙂 . .
      Even if the men are bad , it’s usually the women influencing them .
      Like here with Mamujhan . ..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 08:53

      Nothing has been released yet about the storyline for the new QH . ..
      This time the lead female will actually be an orphan …
      Zoya still had her dad . .

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 08:54

      I’ll watch it now . .
      I think I know what to expect 🙂 . .

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 05, 09:08

      🙁 , that poor girl …
      I see what you mean Sameer . .
      But , I think that since he was so convincing as a bad character then he can do the same with being a good character . .
      I mean , it takes talent for any actor to make an audience believe them . ..

  12. ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
    April 05, 07:40 Reply

    Sameer. ,I had watched the video . .
    I think that you missed my response . .

    • sameer
      April 05, 08:01

      iam fine.
      and sorry for late replying.
      i was gone for namaz…
      and there is no power in my house.
      so iam using my cell
      so it is taking lots of time in replying.

    • sameer
      April 05, 08:20

      sorry my nephew is crying.
      he wants my cell to play game.
      ill be back as the power comes in it..
      bye…..

  13. ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
    April 05, 07:28 Reply

    QH love story will soon turn into a tragedy 😐 . .
    No mater if all the bad people get punished and we have reasons to be happy ,
    everyone will still be very upset and saddened because of AsYa’s death . .
    I wish GK could have thought of a better way ahead for QH , other than to tragically kill
    both of her main leads 😐 . …

  14. ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
    April 04, 23:05 Reply

    Aki dear , bath time and then sleep time for me 🙂 . .
    Great seeing you as usual 😉 . ..
    Have a nice day !!! ❤️

    • Aki
      April 04, 23:09

      Byeee dr tc…sweet dreams ….nice c u too 😀 ..
      Hve a lovely nxt day 😀 tc…

  15. ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
    April 04, 22:37 Reply

    So did I 🙂 . .They got their runs so easily . .
    Played it cool and saved their wickets . .
    It was good cricket 🙂 . ..
    SA had a good total , but I knew they would lose . .

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:43

      And i thought India will loose but virat did a good job 😀 …
      But in the whole match i found SA plyrs hairstyle very intrsting ..tht of steyn n 1 more plyrs ..

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:47

      But i felt bad for SA TOO many of my fav players there too 😀 …
      But i m not satisfied with 1st semi fnal rsult ..if it would hve not rained WI hve also won..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:48

      Hahaha yes 🙂 . .interesting hairstyles . .
      Sunil Narine has a mow-hawk , but it doesn’t look so odd . ..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:50

      Yeah 🙂 , maybe . .
      But they were struggling a bit , Sammy was still there though . .
      I don’t like the D/L system to determine the outcome of such high intensity games . .
      An over can produce more than 30 runs at times . ..

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:50

      Srilanka had good chance of taking revenge 😀 from INDIA becz last world cup 50-50 India took away from thm ..now they had good chance too take it away 😉 but i dont want this 😀

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:53

      Malinga is doing a good job as captain . .
      He is giving 100 % .
      The Sri Lankans have a strong team . .
      Herath didn’t bowl his best yesterday though . .
      India has a better batting line up I think . ..

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:54

      I too hate that d/l system 😀 …
      WI is unprdictable thy can do anything 😉

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:57

      It’s the nature of all West Indians 😀 . ..
      Gayle was disappointing though .

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:59

      We cant predict anythng tiil match doesnt finish …. 😀

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 23:01

      I predicted that WI would beat Pakistan 🙂 . .
      But , I expected them to have a tougher time against Sri Lanka . .

    • Aki
      April 04, 23:02

      But its quiet suprsing mostly he makes runs in ipl only 🙁 ..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 23:03

      He got a bit injured yesterday while fielding , but even b4 he looked in poor form . .

    • Aki
      April 04, 23:04

      Hw re ur cls going ?

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 23:06

      I’m off for two weeks but I still have on Saturdays . ..
      Going good , final exams next month 🙂

    • Aki
      April 04, 23:07

      Gale is brilliant plyr..we cnt deny that fact ….but he plays underpressure ..i think so..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 23:09

      Under pressure should help him perform better 🙂 . ..
      Yeah , he’s a very good player , The Master Blaster 🙂

    • Aki
      April 04, 23:12

      My clss $ooo 🙁 i usully get too tired now …in every cls we get scolding only 😀 ..
      So i prefer not to go scl 2day 😀

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:27

      😀 u re asking about movie from me … 🙂 … I watch movies but very late after they releases 😀
      ok i hve heard youngistan is good movie ..
      One more released o teri but it is not interesting… 😉

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:29

      Ashiqui 2 will be the best never get bore watching it 😉

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:29

      Yeah , I have some to watch , but not feeling to watch them 🙂 . .
      I wanted a different one . .
      Did you see Yaariyaan ??
      Did you watch the cricket today ??

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:31

      Yeah, I watched it 4 times already 🙂 . .
      You know , I like Gunday a lot . .
      I can watch that also repeatedly . .

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:31

      Queen it is very intrsting movie i hve listened 😉 n ragni mms 2 too ….

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:34

      Ok , youngistan , queen and ragni mms 2 🙂 . .

      Thank !!!

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:34

      Yeah i watched whole match 😀
      i hve seen yaarian but didnt find it intrsting ..i didnt get what was there in the movie 😀 seriously … 🙂

  16. ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
    April 04, 22:12 Reply

    I’m good Aki 🙂 . .
    How are you m dear ??
    You don’t like him ?

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:18

      I m gud too 😀
      I hve seen his eariler serial sohhagya something like that it was a nice serial 😀 ..very popular too ….
      I like him but cant imagine him doing romantic scene 😉

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:20

      It ws on like ok …but i hvnt watch every epi 🙂

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:22

      *life ok 😀

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:22

      I had never seen him b4. .
      But , judging from the clips , he seems ok . ..

  17. ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
    April 04, 22:09 Reply

    I watched the video Sameer , thank you . .
    He seems so genuinely distressed by her death .
    But , she just threw the antidote away , and said she hates him and preferred to die 😐 . .
    He had to have put her through hell b4 , for her to say that . .
    It seems like an interesting show . . ..

  18. Aki
    April 04, 21:56 Reply

    New male lead is karnveer bhora 🙂 …but he totally looks like villian 😛 ….mns he is surely tanveer sons 😉 …

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 22:05

      😀 . ..
      Tanveer’s baby 🙂 . …
      He seems ok though . ..
      He will look good with Surbhi . .

    • Aki
      April 04, 22:09

      Hey suni 😀 ..hw re u??
      I dont find him ok too 😀

  19. Aki
    April 04, 21:52 Reply

    Good morning/ night 😀 every1 ….
    Hve a good day 🙂 ..

  20. ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
    April 04, 20:40 Reply

    “Hope” is the thing with feathers –

    BY EMILY DICKINSON

    “Hope” is the thing with feathers –
    That perches in the soul –
    And sings the tune without the words –
    And never stops – at all –

    And sweetest – in the Gale – is heard –
    And sore must be the storm –
    That could abash the little Bird
    That kept so many warm –

    I’ve heard it in the chillest land –
    And on the strangest Sea –
    Yet – never – in Extremity,
    It asked a crumb – of me.

    This is one of her most famous poems . .
    When you come back , maybe you can read it 🙂 . .

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:44

      Its good…but I prefer my poems.
      I like the fact that every word is true.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:47

      But , in order to learn we must know about others besides ourselves . ..
      People have different ways of seeing things . .
      I’m always fascinated by how different yet how similar people are ..
      Most people , regardless go where they are from , want the same thing . ..

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:51

      I enjoy talking to you…I like how your different from everyone else.
      Your thoughts are worth a million dollars.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:54

      Awwww , maybe two pence 😀
      But it’s very sweet of you to say . .
      I like talking to you also 🙂 . .

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:55

      You should rest dear . .
      We will chat a next time 🙂

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:57

      Its almost 2:00……ok then, bye……I lost track of time.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 21:01

      Sweet dreams 🙂 . .
      Have you last word :P. .

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 21:05

      I’m always going to gt the last word….I’ll stay here all night if need be.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 21:13

      Ok , I had to reply to the not drinking water part 😐 . .
      Our bodies are made up of around 70% water . .
      Our cells are made of water . .
      Water eliminates impurities . .
      8 glasses a day is recommended . ..
      Drinking other beverages isn’t the same . ..

    • sameer-s
      April 04, 23:58

      it is also nice..
      and thanks suni for posting it..

  21. allahu akbar
    April 04, 20:21 Reply

    Ok…..no one is here…..I might as well go too….bye everyone.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:22

      Your dad hasn’t gotten home yet ?
      I came to check Sameer’s video link and I saw you’re still here 🙂 . .

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:25

      Yeh he goes work late…like at 5:00 that’s why he comes back late.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:32

      Ok 🙂 . .
      You believe in pre -destination ?
      That our lives are mapped out for us and that we just follow it ?
      Or do you believe that we make our own destiny ?
      I know it’s a tough question 🙂 . .
      But you’re a different 15 year old from the others 🙂 . ..

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:34

      I think whatever happens will happen, but its up to us to whine about it or laugh about it.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:36

      That’s good 🙂 . .
      Because as they say ” in each life some rain must fall ”
      It really is all about how we deal with it . ..

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:38

      My dad has come back…..but I’ll go sleep in like 5mins.

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:38

      Ok wait….you believe in love, right?
      But what about true love?

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:39

      I believe in true love and soul mates 🙂 . ..

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:40

      And do you like heartbreak love poems or the lovey dovey type poems….I like sad poems.

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:42

      I don’t….I only believe in hate, like and don’t like.
      Don’t like and hate are two different things to me,

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:42

      Not all . .
      I prefer happy to sad 🙂 ..
      But , like I say . . I accept the reality that love can be like a double edged sword . .

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:42

      Oh and love exists but only with family and friends.

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:45

      Yeh same here……I probably dislike a lot of things and people but I like more than I dislike.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:45

      Nah 🙂 . . I think there can be relationship love also . .

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:49

      Not in todays time…..thy say they love you , they will fight the world for you….but its all one big fat LIE.thy jump on to the next girl as soon as tey see another one…..I undertand not eeryones like that but most are….and I’ve never heard of a girlfriend and boyfriend being together forver.
      After a couple of , months…its not you its me…and just like that…eerythings over.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:49

      Hahahaha 🙂 ..
      Like I said , I’m not always positive 🙂 ..
      But , most times I am yes . .
      Love is actually one of the things I struggle with 🙂

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:53

      I understand 🙂 . .
      But , no one’s experience can be your own . .
      You shouldn’t pre -judge your life based on others . .
      There might be a guy just like you who is looking for love and has a good heart . .
      I think guys want a girl to love them , just like we want . .
      There are successful relationships , but as with most things , we hear the bad things more . .,

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:53

      Really…..how come…..your an angel……who is that blind idiot?

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:56

      I never thought of that….you know what,…your right.
      There could be someone like me wanting the same thing but I was the one who misunderstood that all boys would be the same.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:56

      Hahahaha 🙂 . .
      He’s not an idiot . .
      I just need to move on 🙂

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:59

      Was it just not meant to be or did he do exactly what I think all boys do.
      Promise then break them promises.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:59

      You see , if you learn from others it’s never the same . .
      It helps , yes , but sometimes we need our own experiences to be our teachers . .
      I’m not saying that we do silly things , but , sometimes we can take a chance on someone if we
      get to know them well enough . .. No one ever died of a broken heart 🙂 . ..

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 21:01

      Your definetly a optimist….well they do say oppisites attract…no wonder we’ve gotten alonh so well with each other.

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 21:02

      I can bet my life it was all his fault.

  22. allahu akbar
    April 04, 20:20 Reply

    Whoever has read my poems,
    Can you please tell me which topic or which one was your fav?
    Thank you.
    I would really appreciate it if someone answers.

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:23

      Love…really?
      I like love poems too but I don’t believe in it.
      I think I said that before.

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:27

      I think it’s all in our heads….life is cruel and mean and hard…
      So we want our lives to be like a fairy tale….we want to believe there is someone out there who will love us like crazy…..but it’s all false…..no one is waiting…..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:30

      You’re too young to be this pessimistic 🙂 . .

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:30

      Do you like the heartbreak love poems or the lovey dovey type poems?

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:32

      Wait pessimistic means looking for bad things…..I thought you meant something else.
      My cousin says that and it mean somwthing else.

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:33

      I like realistic poems . .
      William Blake , Emily Dickinson . ..

    • ℘ɧơɛŋıҳ
      April 04, 20:34

      Ok , I’ll explain 🙂 . .
      If there is a glass of water half filled , the optimist sees it as half full
      while the pessimist sees it as half empty . .
      Same reality , but different perception or way of looking at it . ..

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:35

      Never heard of them.

      I think of all the bad outcomes before commiting to something…it could save me from making a mistake and hurting later.

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 20:36

      Bad example….its definitely half….uhh….full?

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 21:00

      No wait its half empty…no its half full….what do you think?

    • allahu akbar
      April 04, 21:03

      Well I don’t drink water anyway so to me its full-full.

    • sameer-s
      April 05, 00:05

      ok i like this poem very much.
      Death-it shatters your life into a million pieces, and makes everything seem a lie.

      It snatches your smile forever,
      And takes away your piece of mind.

      and sofia you dont drink water.
      then what do you drink.
      even if you drink juice you will get thirst..
      ok tell me what will you drink whwn you feel thirsty..

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